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beowulf eulogy essay Author: Patrick Thrasher. Institution: Swarthmore College '01. Though both considered heroes, Beowulf and Sir Gawain are drastically different characters in personality, ability, and perspective. The similarities are few: each performs deeds for which they gain fame and honor, and each is seen, in is my, their own respects, as a paragon of high school essay virtue. Two factors immediately stand out as fundamental differences between the texts: Beowulf and Sir Gawain and the Green Knight suggest fundamentally disparate views of religion and of courtly manners.
Superficially, Beowulf displays a distinct lack of either in any but the most rudimentary way, while Sir Gawain is completely permeated with both. Essays Greatest? These differences in the contextual worlds of the heroes shape and propel them in often wildly different directions. Beginning from these superficial differences in school intensive, Beowulf and Sir Gawain's respective worlds and then analyzing how these two champions (and others) function in their contextual spheres, one can uncover the deeper structures of their social orders, who actually holds power (and narrative power) in them, and, perhaps, something about the values the cultures that produced these two works held. Sir Gawain and the Green Knight describes a well ordered Medieval Christian world. Christianity guides the actions of a hero's soul, courtly love those of essays on why greatest asset his heart &emdash; the most noble knights known under Christ sat around King Arthur's round-table (Part I-line 51). Sir Gawain as a character is the perfect cog in educating, this system, that #91;knight#93; of essays asset courage ever-constant, and customs pure,/ Is pattern and antenna thesis paragon, and praised without end:/ Of all knights on earth most honored is he (II-912-15)#91;1#93;. He is devout &emdash; he emblazoned the on why, image of Mary on antenna thesis, the inside of his shield &emdash; and chivalrous &emdash; his wheedling out of either affronting Lady Bercilak or betraying the trust of her Lord whilst in their company is a truly virtuoso chivalric performance.
Sir Gawain's world is an edifice built of (perhaps arbitrary) religious and chivalric codes that constrain, define and bolster its inhabitants, and Sir Gawain is essays on why its golden child. Gawain is brave, for the great dream essay conclusion example, not because courage is intrinsically good and thus he, as a good knight possesses it, but rather because he puts his faith in God, whom naturally no Christian can second guess. Thus, as he rides to near certain death at the hands of the Green Knight, Gawain proclaims, I shall not give way to weeping;/ God's will be done, amen!/ I commend me to His keeping (IV-2157); when he begins his quest, had he not borne himself bravely, and been on God's side,/ He had met with many mishaps and mortal harms (II-724-5). God will preserve his soul. Sir Gawain's chivalry is by the book, as well; after sparring verbally all morning with the as-yet-unnamed Lady Bercilak in a manner worthy of Andrew the is my greatest, Chaplain himself, she trumps him, forcing him to give her a kiss, declaring: But our guest is not Gawain &emdash; forgot is that thought. So good a knight as Gawain is what are the and importance thesis given out to be, And the model of fair demeanor and manners pure, Had he lain so long at a lady's side. Would have claimed a kiss, by his courtesy, Through some touch or trick of phrase at some tale's end #91;III-1293-1301#93;.
She, knowing Sir Gawain would never be un-courtly to a lady, plays his own ethics against on why greatest, him to obtain her desire. Beowulf describes a world not of Christian harmony and stern mba essays logos but rather of barely restrained chaos, in which life is at essays on why my attitude is my, best somewhat futile and at worst totally meaningless. Religion and courtly manners have not become as elaborate, and are generally more fluid. Beowulf is judged a hero, then, against different criteria. His deeds are valiant because they bring him reputation and educating rita essay frank glory: among his very first words to Hrothgar upon his arrival Beowulf proclaims, the days/ Of my youth have been filled with glory (Beowulf chapter VI-line 408); several lines later he explains that. the monster's scorn of men. Is My Greatest Asset? Is so great that he needs no weapons and fears none.
Nor will I. My lord Higlac. Might think less of me if I let my sword. Go where my feet were afraid to. . God must decide. Who will be given to death's cold grip #91;VI-434-441#93;.#91;2#93; King Higlac's opinion of Beowulf is of great value to frank Beowulf, the former being a man of greatness as well. Beowulf does attribute to essays on why my attitude is my greatest asset God the ultimate power of decision; unlike Sir Gawain, he does not put his trust in God, however &emdash; he merely acknowledges that some force (sometimes God, sometimes fate) has the decisive say. The intricate moral and religious framework in which Sir Gawain so righteously performs either does not exist in Beowulf's world, or is of such little consequence that the stern, narrator can refrain from describing Beowulf in terms of it. Beowulf's deeds are judged by essays my attitude asset, others solely in how they benefit mankind at large, and stern mba essays how they strengthen society. The importance of Beowulf's youthful excesses lies not in essays on why my attitude is my greatest asset, the bravery and stern strength required to perform them but in how, after his swimming contest, sailors could cross/ That sea-road and feel no fear; nothing/ would stop their passing ( Beowulf IX 537). After his death, the essays greatest asset, unnamed messenger delivering Beowulf's eulogy to the court praises him, the high intensive essay, best of essays on why greatest asset kings, Beowulf &emdash; He who held our enemies away, Kept land and gatsby american dream essay treasure intact, who saved.
Hrothgar and the Danes - he who lived. All his long life bravely #91;XXXXI 3003-8#93;. Beowulf is asset a heroic, virtuous man because he kept did what others could not to preserve both his and his allies ways of life. What Are The Thesis? Beowulf and Sir Gawain thus need markedly different societies in which to be known as heroic. Beowulf needs some social network, an amalgamation of receptive and judging individuals who support and disseminate his reputation as a hero, for him to be a hero in on why my attitude is my, actuality. Stern? Sir Gawain, while needing a society to perform in asset, and that has criteria against rita frank, which he can be assessed does not need the people within it: in the Christian world of Gawain salvation rests solely on essays on why my attitude, the individual. Under the surveillance an omniscient God, only the actions as they are performed by which would make essay of the french, the individual, not as they affect others, are of value. That a hero is revered by his neighbors and friends is coincidental: a true knight acts not for the praise of men but for essays my attitude asset the salvation only God can bestow.
A man's Goodness, then, is not awarded him by his peers; while performing socially responsible acts may be necessary to be Good, God bestows the epithet, not other men, and are the characteristics and importance thus society is of little use to a Good man except as an arena in my attitude greatest asset, which to prove his worth. #91;3#93; Governing structures seem so important in which would an effective thesis on the cause, the world of Sir Gawain and the Green Knight that the Green Knight must create other, smaller ones in my attitude, which to humble the most virtuous Gawain. All games have at high school essay, least one necessary (if not sufficient) element: rules and regulations which the participants must obey (or by which they must forfeit something if they disregard). On Why Greatest? These precepts must be viewed as objective, if not by make thesis for an essay french revolution, some outside arbitrator then by is my asset, the participants. Thus, two games figure prominently into the adventure of Sir Gawain: the Christmas game ( Gawain I-283), which the Green Knight proposes with its rules &emdash; I shall stand him a stroke, steady on american dream, this floor. My Attitude Asset? the Green Knight explains, In a twelvemonth and american essay conclusion a day/ He shall have of on why my attitude me the same;. Who dares take up the game (I-294-300); and the game (II-1111) the mischievous host Lord Bercilak proposes to Sir Gawain the night of Gawain's arrival, according to which the stern mba essays, Lord and Sir Gawain will exchange all they won during the essays on why my attitude, course of the day. Like God in Christianity and (perhaps idealistically) the Lady Pursued in chivalry, Lord Bercilak &emdash; or his backers &emdash; creates the antenna thesis, substructure in which Sir Gawain will act and by whose marks he will be judged. Bercilak presumably intended to teach Gawain (and Arthur's court) some sort of essays on why my attitude is my asset lesson, and he could never simply scold him into reforming (Gawain's record, is, after all, spotless).
Nor could he simply force him into acting against the tenets of stern mba essays those structures which have so rewarded and exalted him: Gawain would rather die first. Essays On Why My Attitude Greatest Asset? Therefore, Bercilak must create a new edifice (the Christmas game) into which would thesis on the of the, which he invites Gawain, who then commits to its set of rules. Having lured Gawain into this game and my attitude is my later the exchange game &emdash; which, unbeknownst to Gawain is a sub-game, rather than a completely unrelated one &emdash; Bercilak uses Gawain's unflinching dedication to his agreements #91;4#93; (ie - to participate according to the rules in Bercilak's games) to coerce Gawain to actions that conflict with his (social structure inspired) principles. In such a prescriptive society, trickery seems the educating rita frank, best method of trying and reproaching someone's supposed heroism. In the Anglo-Saxon halls of Beowulf , however, a challenger need do far less to on why my attitude greatest show up another. In chapter 8 (500-529), for example, Unferth rants against the deeds of Beowulf, claiming not only that Beowulf's swimming/monster-slaying match with his childhood friend Brecca was foolhardy (which few would doubt) but also that Brecca bested Beowulf &emdash; an assertion that Unferth in no way supports (through naming eye-witnesses, etc). Stern Mba Essays? Beowulf agrees that his deeds were reckless (We were both too young to know better - 536); he refutes Unferth's declaration of Brecca's victory, however, by my attitude greatest, recounting what (may or may not have) actually happened. Nor does Beowulf sustain his contention through any sort of solid evidence (though presumably one of his countrymen mingling nearby could have vouched for him): he instead attacks Unferth's reputation without support, though Unferth's repugnant acts seem well known to those present. Beowulf can rebuke Unferth on his own, upon the strength of his noble birth (none but the make an effective for an essay on the revolution, Geats know more than his lineage at this point), and without the aid of artificial structures. The crucial difference between Beowulf and Sir Gawain, then, lies in their respective narrative strength and narrative necessity. Essays My Attitude Is My? An author creates a text, but in a classically structured story, the protagonist propels the narrative throughout.
The protagonist has enormous power within his diegetic world. Fate or God put Sir Gawain into his society, and frank he excels in it (it seems). His excellence as a knight and a hero, however, is derived solely from his ability to act according to its principles &emdash; he simply obeys the rules more closely than most others. Never once does he willfully and knowingly stretch or bend the social framework of the diegetic world in greatest asset, which he acts and excels. Nor does he ever add to or remove from it any crucial tenet; rather it decrees upon what characteristics and importance him his status and honor. My Attitude Is My? If Sir Gawain were to die, the american essay conclusion, world he lives in would continue as it did before his birth and my attitude is my greatest asset during his ensoulment. But Beowulf's world is inconceivable without Beowulf. He had provided half a century of stability and well-being to his people, he proclaims with his parting breaths: I've worn this crown. For fifty winters: no neighboring people. Have tried to threaten the Geats, sent soldiers. Against us or talked of terror.
My days. Have gone by as fate willed, waiting. For its word to be spoken, ruling as well. As I knew how, swearing no unholy oaths, Seeking no lying wars. I can leave. This life happy. #91;XXXVII 2732-40#93; Beowulf dies happy knowing that he ruled well and protected his people: when he dies by the dragon (and by those who forsook him), his death signals an end of essay a way of life. More crucially, however, Beowulf's death and the resulting end of society as it had once existed threatens the essays on why greatest, medium the propagation of his fame required. Reputation is sufficient to garner Beowulf respect and to make him heroic. The reputation associated with the heroic rank is composed of two elements: deeds, and mba essays others who hear and recount and judge those deeds. Essays On Why Asset? Sir Gawain can control only the former; the judgement is left to God and antenna thesis the occasional Pursued Lady. Beowulf, through those same deeds for which he is renowned, creates and succors the very means by my attitude is my asset, which he can be a hero: by preserving society, he preserves the make an effective for an cause revolution, lives of the people required to pass on his fame.
In a curiously self-referential moment, Wiglaf calls to the mortally wounded Beowulf: Beloved Beowulf, remember how you boasted, Once, that nothing in the world would ever. Destroy your fame: fight to keep it, Now, be strong, and brave, my noble. King, protecting life and fame. Together. On Why My Attitude Is My Greatest Asset? #91;XXXVI 2663-68#93; If Beowulf dies, the very ability to have a narrative about him dies too . Interestingly, the school intensive essay, only character in Sir Gawain and the Green Knight who has control over the narrative in any way like Beowulf's is Lord Bercilak (or perhaps the on why, true master puppeteer, Morgan la Fey). Bercilak, through his production of sub-structural games that ensnare Sir Gawain, demonstrates an ability (in modern parlance) to antenna thesis think outside the box: he can shunt Gawain out of the essays on why is my, larger social structure into his own and in the process turn him around so far that Gawain runs headfirst into which would an effective for an essay on the french revolution, his own ethics. Bercilak can reveal and greatest manipulate the antenna thesis, social framework of codes, but the framework does not depend on his existence: Beowulf is a foundation for his society, without which it will probably crumble. Another, secondary discrepancy between the heroism of essays on why my attitude is my greatest Sir Gawain and the Green Knight and that in Beowulf involves leadership: in Beowulf , heroes lead men. Hrothgar's ancestry bulges with leaders; his father, Healfdane, was a fierce fighter/ Who led the Danes to school intensive essay the end of on why asset his long/ Life. (I 57-8). Hrothgar himself, taking the throne, led. The Danes to such glory that comrades and antenna thesis kinsmen. Swore by his sword, and young men swelled.
His armies, and he thought of on why my attitude is my asset greatness. #91;I 64-7#93;. To achieve true greatness in this realm a soldier must inspire respect and must lead his men to victory. Sir Gawain inspires awe through his abilities, his virtue, and make an effective thesis cause french revolution his deeds, but never the same respect as a leader of men. Nor could he, I think: the on why my attitude asset, only one at Sir Arthur's fete to step forward to the great american dream essay conclusion accept the Green Knight's challenge is Arthur himself. Sir Gawain volunteers claiming that this folly befits not a king, and yet, one cannot help but feel he is motivated by the fear of Arthur's possible death: he gives as a reason for his undertaking this task that the loss of #91;his#93; life would be least of any ( Gawain I 358 and 355, respectively). Beowulf, on the other hand, seems to be bestowed with powers above those of the usual rulers of his time: his insight into the inevitable demise of Hrothgar's kingdom in chapters 28 and 29 reveals a fatalistic understanding of the inadequacies of those few social practices his culture uses. Beowulf and Sir Gawain are such vastly different heroes that the term collapses into a concept totally dependent on its social context. The criteria upon which they are each judged a hero have at best a tenuous resemblance to each other: in Sir Gawain's world those who obey the religious and essays on why greatest asset social codes (including chivalric ones) of antenna thesis his realm can be titled a hero, while in Beowulf those who actually create and support society itself are heroic. Gawain seems to have little motivation aside from the proddings of the morays of his culture; the preservation of his culture propels Beowulf. Not entirely altruistic, the continuation of Beowulf's legacy depends upon essays is my greatest asset the preservation of people to circulate it, and thus Beowulf has almost supreme importance to his own narrative: when he dies, a very real chance exists that his people and hence the possibility of his continued existence after death will perish with him.
These differences, I think, reflect the enormous shift in perspective that Christianity brought to Northern Europe. Rita Essay Frank? In traditional Norse mythology, brave warriors who die in battle proceed to an afterlife in Valhalla, awaiting the final call to arms, Ragnarrok. The retelling of one's deeds among those still living constituted another, vital form of life after death, and thus even a quest for personal glory ultimately led to acts which perpetuated and my attitude is my greatest asset served society. Ragnarrok was a singularity even the gods could not avoid: the final, ultimate triumph of educating entropy. Any act that helped stave off that triumph was heroic, and thus those who organized and strengthened their society, ie, the kings and chieftains, were worthy of high honor. But Christianity, with its notion of an omnipotent, ultimately benevolent Deity changed these tribes' cosmic perception: an on why my attitude is my greatest over-arching order to the cosmos now existed, created eternal by educating rita essay, an eternal being, above any piddling systems men could create. This apocalyptic safety net thus removed the essays, burden of fending off the e'er encroaching entropy, and provided a set of gatsby american dream essay conclusion new, absolute criteria for virtue and heroism. 1: If read as satirical, Sir Gawain and the Green Knight takes on a new flavor. The descriptions remain the same, however; only the author's intention changes.
All Gawain citations are from Sir Gawain and essays on why my attitude is my greatest the Green Knight , translated by antenna thesis, Marie Borroff, 1967 by W.W. Norton and Company, Inc, New York and London. #91;back#93; 2: All Beowulf quotes are taken from Beowulf , translated by Burton Raffel, 1963 by Burton Raffel, published by Penguin Books, USA. #91;back#93; 3: This explains why the (presumed and unrecounted - Gawain II-705-735) deeds of Sir Gawain and Beowulf appear similar but feel so different &emdash; to an non-omniscient objective viewer, a man acting charitably out of essays on why greatest asset compassion for antenna thesis other people and a man acting charitably because God will save his (individual) soul appear to be performing the essays on why my attitude greatest asset, same deeds.#91;back#93; 4: A tenet supplied by his chivalric code.#91;back#93;
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KurzweilAI | Accelerating Intelligence. The Computer as a Communication Device. This landmark 1968 essay foresaw many future computer applications and advances in communication technology, such as distributed information resources and online interactive communities that are commonplace today as Internet chat rooms and peer-to-peer applications. Originally published in Science and Technology , April 1968 . Published on KurzweilAI.net November 9, 2001. In a few years, men will be able to communicate more effectively through a machine than face to essays on why is my asset, face. That is a rather startling thing to say, but it is what are the thesis statement, our conclusion. As if in essays on why my attitude is my greatest asset confirmation of it, we participated a few weeks ago in a technical meeting held through a computer. In two days, the group accomplished with the aid of which thesis on the cause of the, a computer what normally might have taken a week. We shall talk more about the mechanics of the meeting later; it is sufficient to note here that we were all in the same room.
But for all the communicating we did directly across that room, we could have been thousands of miles apart and on why greatest asset communicated just as effectively-as people-over the distance. Our emphasis on people is deliberate. A communications engineer thinks of communicating as transferring information from one point to another in high school codes and signals. But to communicate is more than to send and to receive. Do two tape recorders communicate when they play to each other and record from each other? Not really-not in our sense. We believe that communicators have to do something nontrivial with the on why is my greatest asset information they send and receive.
And we believe that we are entering a technological age in which we will be able to interact with the richness of living information-not merely in the passive way that we have become accustomed to are the statement, using books and libraries, but as active participants in an ongoing process, bringing something to it through our interaction with it, and not simply receiving something from it by our connection to it. To the people who telephone an airline flight operations information service, the tape recorder that answers seems more than a passive depository. Essays On Why Is My Greatest! It is an often-updated model of a changing situation-a synthesis of information collected, analyzed, evaluated, and assembled to and importance thesis, represent a situation or process in an organized way. Still there is not much direct interaction with the essays on why is my greatest airline information service; the high tape recording is not changed by essays asset, the customer’s call. We want to high intensive essay, emphasize something beyond its one-way transfer: the increasing significance of the jointly constructive, the mutually reinforcing aspect of communication-the part that transcends “now we both know a fact that only one of us knew before.” When minds interact, new ideas emerge. Essays My Attitude Is My Greatest! We want to talk about the creative aspect of communication. Creative, interactive communication requires a plastic or moldable medium that can be modeled, a dynamic medium in which premises will flow into antenna thesis consequences, and above all a common medium that can be contributed to and experimented with by all. Such a medium is at hand–the programmed digital computer. Its presence can change the nature and value of communication even more profoundly than did the on why my attitude is my greatest printing press and the picture tube, for, as we shall show, a well-programmed computer can provide direct access both to school essay, informational resources and to the processes for making use of the resources.
Communication: a comparison of models. To understand how and why the computer can have such an effect on communication, we must examine the idea of my attitude greatest, modeling-in a computer and with the aid of a computer. For modeling, we believe, is basic and central to essay, communication. Any communication between people about the my attitude same thing is a common revelatory experience about informational models of that thing. Educating Essay! Each model is a conceptual structure of abstractions formulated initially in the mind of one of the persons who would communicate, and if the concepts in the mind of one would-be communicator are very different from those in the mind of another, there is essays my attitude asset, no common model and no communication. By far the most numerous, most sophisticated, and most important models arc those that reside in men’s minds, In richness, plasticity, facility, and economy, the mental model has no peer, but, in other respects, it has shortcomings. It will not stand still for careful study. It cannot be made to repeat a run.
No one knows just how it works. It serves its owner’s hopes more faithfully than it serves reason. It has access only to the information stored in one man’s head. It can be observed and manipulated only by one person. Society rightly distrusts the modeling done by a single mind. Society demands consensus, agreement, at least majority. Fundamentally, this amounts to the requirement that individual models be compared and brought into the great gatsby dream conclusion some degree of accord.
The requirement is for communication, which we now define concisely as “cooperative modeling”–cooperation in the construction, maintenance, and use of a model. How can we be sure that we are modeling cooperatively, that we are communicating, unless we can compare models? When people communicate face to face, they externalize their models so they can be sure they are talking about the same thing. Even such a simple externalized model as a flow diagram or an outline–because it can be seen by all the communicators–serves as a focus for discussion. It changes the nature of communication: When communicators have no such common framework, they merely make speeches at each other; but when they have a manipulable model before them, they utter a few words, point, sketch, nod, or object. The dynamics of such communication are so model-centered as to suggest an my attitude is my greatest asset, important conclusion: Perhaps the reason present-day two-way telecommunication falls so far short of face-to-face communication is simply that it fails to provide facilities for externalizing models. Is it really seeing the expression in the other’s eye that makes the face-to-face conference so much more productive than the telephone conference call, or is it being able to high intensive, create and essays on why is my asset modify external models? In a technical project meeting, one can see going on, in intensive fairly clear relief, the modeling process that we contend constitutes communication.
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If, at the outset, their two models were similar in structure but different simply in the values of certain parameters, then communication would cause convergence toward a common pattern. Mba Essays! That is the easiest and most frequent kind of communication. If the two mental models were structurally dissimilar, then the achievement of communication would be signaled by on why my attitude is my greatest asset, structural changes in one of the models or in both of them. We might conclude that one of the communicating parties was having insights or trying out new hypotheses in order to begin to gatsby american conclusion, understand the other-or that both were restructuring their mental models to achieve commonality. The meeting of many interacting minds is a more complicated process. Suggestions and essays my attitude recommendations may be elicited from all sides. The interplay may produce, not just a solution to a problem, but a new set of rules for solving problems. That, of course, is the essence of creative interaction.
The process of maintaining a current model has within it a set of changing or changeable rules for the processing and disposition of information. The project meeting we have just described is representative of a broad class of which thesis for an french, human endeavor which may be described as creative informational activity. Let us differentiate this from essays on why my attitude another class which we will call informational housekeeping. The latter is what computers today are used for school, in the main; they process payroll checks, keep track of essays on why my attitude greatest, bank balances, calculate orbits of space vehicles, control repetitive machine processes, and maintain varieties of debit and credit lists. Mostly they have not been used to make coherent pictures of not well understood situations.
We referred earlier to a meeting in which the participants interacted with each other through a computer. That meeting was organized by Doug Engelbart of american, Stanford Research Institute and was actually a progress-review conference for a specific project. The subject under discussion was rich in detail and broad enough in my attitude is my scope that no one of the attendees, not even the host, could know all the information pertaining to this particular project. Tables were arranged to antenna thesis, form a square work area with five on a side. The center of the essays is my asset area contained six television monitors which displayed the stern mba essays alphanumeric output of a computer located elsewhere in the building but remotely controlled from a keyboard and a set of electronic pointer controllers called “mice.” Any participant in the meeting could move a near-by mouse, and thus control the movements of a tracking pointer on the TV screen for all other participants to see. Each person working on the project had prepared a topical outline of his particular presentation for the meeting, and his outline appeared on the screens as he talked–providing a broad view of his own model. Many of the outline statements contained the on why is my names of particular reference files which the speaker could recall from the computer to appear in detail on the screens, for, from the beginning of the project, its participants had put their work into high intensive the computer system’s files. So the meeting began much like any other meeting in the sense that there was an essays on why my attitude is my greatest, overall list of agenda and that each speaker had brought with him (figuratively in his briefcase but really within the educating essay frank computer) the on why my attitude greatest material he would be talking about. The computer system was a significant aid in exploring the depth and stern breadth of the material. My Attitude Greatest! More detailed information could be displayed when facts had to be pinpointed; more global information could be displayed to answer questions of relevance and interrelationship.
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The importance of improving decision-making processes–not only in essays on why my attitude is my greatest government, but throughout business and the professions–is so great as to warrant every effort. As we see it, group decision-making is simply the active, executive, effect-producing aspect of the kind of communication we are discussing. We have commented that one must oversimplify. We have tried to say why one must oversimplify. But we should not oversimplify the main point of this article. We can say with genuine and an effective thesis for an on the cause of the revolution strong conviction that a particular form of digital computer organization, with its programs and its data, constitutes the dynamic, moldable medium that can revolutionize the art of modeling and that in so doing can improve the effectiveness of communication among people so much as perhaps to revolutionize that also. But we must associate with that statement at once the qualification that the computer alone can make no contribution that will help us, and on why my attitude is my greatest asset that the computer with the programs and the data that it has today can do little more than suggest a direction and provide a few germinal examples. Emphatically we do not say: “Buy a computer and what and importance thesis your communication problems will be solved.” What we do say is that we, together with many colleagues who have had the experience of on why, working on-line and interactively with computers, have already sensed more responsiveness and facilitation and “power” than we had hoped for, considering the inappropriateness of educating rita essay, present machines and the primitiveness of their software. Many of us are therefore confident (some of us to the point of religious zeal) that truly significant achievements, which will markedly improve our effectiveness in communication, now are on the horizon. Many communications engineers, too, are presently excited about the application of digital computers to communication.
However, the function they want computers to essays on why is my, implement is the switching function. Computers will either switch the communication lines, connecting them together in rita frank required configurations, or switch (the technical term is “store and forward”) messages. The switching function is important but it is not the one we have in mind when we say that the computer can revolutionize communication. We are stressing the modeling function, not the switching function. Until now, the communications engineer has not felt it within his province to essays my attitude is my asset, facilitate the modeling function, to make an interactive, cooperative modeling facility. Information transmission and school essay information processing have always been carried out separately and have become separately institutionalized. There are strong intellectual and on why my attitude asset social benefits to be realized by dream conclusion, the melding of these two technologies. There are also, however, powerful legal and administrative obstacles in the way of essays on why my attitude, any such melding. Distributed intellectual resources.
We have seen the beginnings of communication through a computer–communication among people at consoles located in the same room or on the same university campus or even at distantly separated laboratories of the same research and development organization. This kind of communication–through a single multiaccess computer with the aid of telephone lines–is beginning to foster cooperation and promote coherence more effectively than do present arrangements for gatsby dream conclusion, sharing computer programs by exchanging magnetic tapes by messenger or mail. Computer programs are very important because they transcend mere “data”–they include procedures and processes for structuring and manipulating data. My Attitude Is My Greatest! These are the main resources we can now concentrate and share with the aid of the tools and techniques of computers and communication, but they are only a part of the whole that we can learn to concentrate and share. The whole includes raw data, digested data, data about the location of antenna thesis, data–and documents–and most especially models. To appreciate the import ante the new computer-aided communication can have, one must consider the dynamics of “critical mass,” as it applies to cooperation in creative endeavor. Take any problem worthy of the name, and you find only a few people who can contribute effectively to its solution. Is My Asset! Those people must be brought into close intellectual partnership so that their ideas can come into contact with one another. But bring these people together physically in one place to form a team, and you have trouble, for the most creative people are often not the best team players, and there are not enough top positions in a single organization to keep them all happy. Let them go their separate ways, and each creates his own empire, large or small, and devotes more time to the role of would make an effective thesis for an on the of the revolution, emperor than to the role of problem solver.
The principals still get together at meetings. They still visit one another. But the time scale of their communication stretches out, and the correlations among mental models degenerate between meetings so that it may take a year to essays, do a week’s communicating. There has to be some way of antenna thesis, facilitating communicant ion among people wit bout bringing them together in one place. A single multiaccess computer would fill the bill if expense were no object, but there is no way, with a single computer and essays on why my attitude greatest individual communication lines to several geographically separated consoles, to avoid paying an unwarrantedly large bill for transmission. Part of the rita essay frank economic difficulty lies in our present communications system. When a computer is used interactively from a typewriter console, the signals transmitted between the console and the computer are intermittent and essays on why my attitude is my not very frequent. They do not require continuous access to a telephone channel; a good part of the antenna thesis time they do not even require the full information rate of on why my attitude greatest, such a channel. The difficulty is that the common carriers do not provide the kind of the great gatsby american conclusion, service one would like to essays on why my attitude is my greatest asset, have–a service that would let one have ad lib access to a channel for short intervals and not be charged when one is not using the channel.
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More important, the interconnected computers are not interactive, general-purpose, multiaccess machines of the type described by David  and Licklider . Although more interactive multi-access computer systems are being delivered now, and although more groups plan to be using these systems within the next year, there are at present perhaps only as few as half a dozen interactive multiaccess computer communities . These communities are socio-technical pioneers, in several ways out ahead of the rest of the would make thesis for an cause of the french computer world: What makes them so? First, some of their members are computer scientists and engineers who understand the on why is my greatest asset concept of man-computer interaction and the technology of educating essay, interactive multiaccess systems. Second, others of their members are creative people in essays other fields and disciplines who recognize the usefulness and who sense the impact of interactive multiaccess computing upon their work. Third, the communities have large multiaccess computers and have learned to which would make thesis essay of the french, use them. And, fourth, their efforts are regenerative. In the half-dozen communities, the computer systems research and essays my attitude is my greatest asset development and the development of substantive applications mutually support each other.
They are producing large and growing resources of programs, data, and are the characteristics and importance of a statement know-how. But we have seen only the beginning. There is much more programming and data collect ion–and much more learning how to cooperate–to be done before the full potential of the concept can be realized. Obviously, multiaccess systems must be developed interactively. The systems being built must remain flexible and open-ended throughout the process of development, which is evolutionary. Such systems cannot be developed in small ways on small machines. They require large, multiaccess computers, which are necessarily complex. Indeed, the sonic barrier in the development of such systems is complexity. These new computer systems we are describing differ from other computer systems advertised with the same labels: interactive, time-sharing, multiaccess. On Why My Attitude Is My Greatest Asset! They differ by having a greater degree of open-endedness, by rendering more services, and which would make essay french revolution above all by providing facilities that foster a working sense of essays my attitude, community among their users. The commercially available time-sharing services do not yet offer the power and flexibility of school essay, soft ware resources–the “general purposeness”–of the interactive multiaccess systems of the System Development Corporation in Santa Monica, the University of California at essays on why my attitude asset, Berkeley, Massachusetts Institute of Technology in Cambridge and Lexington, Mass.–which have been collectively serving about gatsby a thousand people for several years.
The thousand people include many of the leaders of the ongoing revolution in the computer world. For over a year they have been preparing for on why my attitude greatest asset, the transition to a radically new organization of hardware and software, designed to support many more simultaneous users than the current systems, and to offer them–through new languages, new file-handling systems, and new graphic displays–the fast, smooth interaction required for truly effective man-computer partnership. Experience has shown the importance of making the what characteristics and importance of a thesis statement response time short and the conversation free and essays on why greatest easy. We think those attributes will be almost as important for a network of the great gatsby american, computers as for a single computer. Today the on-line communities are separated from one another functionally as well as geographically. Each member can look only to the processing, storage and software capability of the facility upon which his community is centered. But now the move is on to interconnect the separate communities and thereby transform them into, let us call it, a supercommunity. The hope is that interconnection will make available to all the members of all the communities the programs and data resources of the entire supercommunity. First, let us indicate how these communities can be interconnected; then we shall describe one hypothetical person’s interaction with this network, of interconnected computers.
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And through them, all the members of the supercommunity can communicate–with other people, with programs, with data, or with selected combinations of those resources. High School Intensive! The message processors, being all alike, introduce an essays on why is my greatest, element of uniformity into an otherwise grossly non-uniform situation, for they facilitate both hardware and software compatibility among diverse and poorly compatible computers. The links among the message processors are transmission and high-speed digital switching facilities provided by common carrier. This allows the linking of the message processors to the great dream, be reconfigured in response to demand. A message can be thought of as a short sequence of “bits” flowing through the essays is my network from one multiaccess computer to another. It consists of two types of information: control and data. Control information guides the transmission of antenna thesis, data from essays greatest source to destination. In present transmission systems, errors are too frequent for many computer applications. However, through the use of error detection and correction or retransmission procedures in the message processors, messages can be delivered to their destinations intact even though many of antenna thesis, their “bits” were mutilated at my attitude is my asset, one point or another along the way.
In short, the message processors function in rita essay the system as traffic directors, controllers, and correctors. Today, programs created at one installation on a given manufacturer’s computer are generally not of my attitude, much value to users of a different manufacturer’s computer at another installation. After learning (with difficulty) of a distant program’s existence, one has to get it, understand it, and recode it for his own computer. The cost is comparable to the cost of preparing a new program from scratch, which is, in fact, what most programmers usually do. On a national scale, the antenna thesis annual cost is enormous. Within a network of interactive, multiaccess computer systems, on the other hand, a person at one node will have access to programs running at other nodes, even though those programs were written in different languages for different computers. The feasibility of using programs at remote locations has been shown by the successful linking of the AN/FSQ-32 computer at Systems Development Corporation in Santa Monica, Calif., with the TX-2 computer across the on why asset continent at the Lincoln Laboratory in Lexington, Mass. Antenna Thesis! A person at essays on why my attitude is my asset, a TX-2 graphic console can make use of a unique list-processing program at SDC, which would be prohibitively expensive to translate for use on the TX-2. A network of 14 such diverse computers, all of which will be capable of the great, sharing one another’s resources, is now being planned by essays is my greatest, the Defense Department’s Advanced Research Projects Agency, and its contractors. The system’s way of managing data is crucial to the user who works in interaction with many other people. It should put generally useful data, if not subject to what are the characteristics and importance of a, control of access, into public files.
Each user, however, should have complete control over his personal files. He should define and distribute the “keys” to each such file, exercising his option to exclude all others from any kind of access to it; or to permit anyone to “read” but not modify or execute it; or to permit selected individuals or groups to my attitude is my, execute but not read it; and so on-with as much detailed specification or as much aggregation as he likes. The system should provide for group and organizational files within its overall information base. At least one of the new multiaccess systems will exhibit such features. In several of the research centers we have mentioned, security and privacy of information are subjects of active concern; they are beginning to get the attention they deserve.
In a multiaccess system, the number of consoles permitted to use the computer simultaneously depends upon would an effective for an on the the load placed on the computer by the users’ jobs, and essays greatest asset may be varied automatically as the load changes. Large general-purpose muftiaccess systems operating today can typically support 20 to 30 simultaneous users. Some of these users may work with low-level “assembly” languages while others use higher-level “compiler” or “interpreter” languages. Concurrently, others may use data management and high intensive graphical systems. And so on.
But back to our hypothetical user. He seats himself at his console, which may be a terminal keyboard plus a relatively slow printer, a sophisticated graphical console, or any one of several intermediate devices. He dials his local computer and “logs in” by presenting his name, problem number, and password to the monitor program. He calls for either a public program, one of his own programs, or a colleague’s program that he has permission to use. The monitor links him to it, and he then communicates with that program. When the user (or the program) needs service from a program at another node in asset the network, he (or it) requests the service by which would an effective thesis essay of the, specifying the essays asset location of the appropriate computer and the identity of the program required.
If necessary, he uses computerized directories to determine those data. Stern! The request is translated by one or more of the message processors into the precise language required by the remote computer’s monitor. Essays On Why My Attitude! Now the user (or his local program) and high school essay the remote program can interchange information. When the information transfer is complete, the user (or his local program) dismisses the remote computer, again with the aid of the message processors. In a commercial system, the remote processor would at this point record cost information for use in billing. The mention of billing brings up an on why my attitude greatest asset, important matter. Computers and high school essay long-distance calls have “expensive” images. One of the standard reactions to the idea of “on-line communities” is: “It sounds great, but who can afford it?”
In considering that question, let us do a little arithmetic. The main elements of the cost of computer-facilitated communication, over and above the salaries of the communicators, are the cost of the consoles, processing, storage, transmission, and on why my attitude is my greatest supporting software. In each category, there is antenna thesis, a wide range of possible costs, depending in part upon the sophistication of the equipment, programs, or services employed and in part upon whether they are custom-made or mass-produced. Making rough estimates of the hourly component costs per user, we arrived at the following: $1 for essays on why my attitude, a console, $5 for one man’s share of the services of which thesis for an essay cause revolution, a processor, 70 cents for storage, $3 for essays on why is my greatest, transmission via line leased from a common carrier, and $1 for software support-a total cost of just less than $11 per communicator hour. The only obviously untenable assumption underlying that result, we believe, is the assumption that one’s console and the personal files would be used 160 hours per month. All the high school intensive other items are assumed to be shared with others, and my attitude is my greatest asset experience indicates that time-sharing leads on the average to somewhat greater utilization than the make an effective essay on the cause of the revolution 160 hours per month that we assumed, Note, however, that the console and the personal files are items used also in individual problem solving and decision making.
Surely those activities, taken together with communication, would occupy at least 25% of the working hours of the on-line executive, scientist or engineer. If we cut the duty factor of the console and files to one quarter of 160 hours per month, the essays on why my attitude asset estimated total cost comes to $16 per hour. Let us assume that our $16/hr interactive computer link is set up between Boston, Mass., and antenna thesis Washington, D.C. Is $16/hr affordable? Compare it first with the cost of ordinary telephone communication: Even if you take advantage of the lower charge per minute for long calls, it is less than the daytime direct-dial station-to-station toll.
Compare it with the cost of my attitude asset, travel: If one flies from Boston to Washington in the morning and back in the evening, he can have eight working hours in the capital city in return for about $64 in air and taxi fares plus the spending of four of his early morning and evening hours en route. If those four hours are worth $16 each, then the rita essay bill for the eight hours in Washington is $128-again $16 per hour. Or look at it still another way: If computer-aided communication doubled the essays asset effectiveness of a man paid $16 per hour then, according to our estimate, it would be worth what it cost if it could be bought right now. Thus we have some basis for arguing that computer-aided communication is economically feasible. What Characteristics Thesis! But we must admit that the essays on why greatest figure of school intensive essay, $16 per hour sounds high, and we do not want to let our discussion depend upon it. Fortunately, we do not have to, for the system we envision cannot be bought at this moment. The time scale provides a basis for genuine optimism about the cost picture. My Attitude! It will take two years, at least, to bring the first interactive computer networks up to a significant level of experimental activity. Operational systems might reach critical size in as little as six years if everyone got onto the bandwagon, but there is little point in making cost estimates for a nearer date. So let us take six years as the target.
In the computer field, the cost of the great essay conclusion, a unit of processing and the cost of a unit of storage have been dropping for two decades at the rate of essays is my, 50% or more every two years. Intensive Essay! In six years, there is time for at least three such drops, which cut a dollar down to 12 1/2 cents. Three halvings would take the cost of processing, now $5 per hour on our assumptions, down to less than 65 cents per hour. Such advances in capability, accompanied by reduction in cost, lead us to expect that computer facilitation will be affordable before many people are ready to take advantage of it. The only areas that cause us concern are consoles and essays is my greatest asset transmission. In the console field, there is school intensive, plenty of competition; many firms have entered the console sweepstakes, and essays greatest more are entering every month. Antenna Thesis! Lack of competition is not the problem. The problem is the problem of the chicken and the egg–in the factory and in on why the market. If a few companies would take the plunge into mass manufacture, then the cost of a satisfactory console would drop enough to open up a mass market.
If large on-line communities were already in being, their mass market would attract mass manufacture. But at present there is neither mass manufacture nor a mass market, and rita essay frank consequently there is essays is my asset, no low-cost console suitable for interactive on-line communication. In the field of transmission, the difficulty may be lack of gatsby dream conclusion, competition. At any rate, the cost of transmission is not falling nearly as fast as the cost of processing and storage. Nor is it falling nearly as fast as we think it should fall. Even the advent of satellites has affected the cost picture by less than a factor of two. That fact does not cause immediate distress because (unless the distance is very great) transmission cost is not now the dominant cost. But, at the rate things are going, in six years it will be the dominant cost. That prospect concerns us greatly and essays on why is my asset is the high school intensive strongest damper to essays on why is my asset, our hopes for near-term realization of operationally significant interactive networks and significant on-line communities. But let us be optimistic. What will on-line interactive communities be like?
In most fields they will consist of geographically separated members, sometimes grouped in small clusters and sometimes working individually. They will be communities not of common location, but of school, common interest . In each field, the overall community of on why, interest will be large enough to support a comprehensive system of field-oriented programs and data. In each geographical sector, the antenna thesis total number of users–summed over all the fields of essays on why, interest–will be large enough to support extensive general-purpose information processing and storage facilities. All of these will be interconnected by telecommunications channels. The whole will constitute a labile network of networks–ever-changing in both content and configuration. What will go on inside? Eventually, every informational transaction of sufficient consequence to warrant the cost. Each secretary’s typewriter, each data-gathering instrument, conceivably each dictation microphone, will feed into the network. You will not send a letter or a telegram; you will simply identify the people whose files should be linked to yours and the parts to which they should be linked–and perhaps specify a coefficient of intensive, urgency. On Why! You will seldom make a telephone call; you will ask the high essay network to my attitude is my, link your consoles together.
You will seldom make a purely business trip, because linking consoles will be so much more efficient. When you do visit another person with the object of high essay, intellectual communication, you and essays my attitude greatest asset he will sit at essay frank, a two-place console and interact as much through it as face to face. If our extrapolation from Doug Engelbart’s meeting proves correct, you will spend much more time in computer-facilitated teleconferences and much less en route to on why, meetings. A very important part of each man’s interaction with his on-line community will be mediated by his OLIVER. The acronym OLIVER honors Oliver Selfridge, originator of the concept. An OLIVER is, or will be when there is one, an “on-line interactive vicarious expediter and responder,” a complex of computer programs and data that resides within the network and acts on behalf of its principal, taking care of which thesis essay on the, many minor matters that do not require his personal attention and buffering him from the demanding world. “You are describing a secretary,” you will say. But no! Secretaries will have OLIVERS. At your command, your OLIVER will take notes (or refrain from taking notes) on what you do, what you read, what you buy and where you buy it. It will know who your friends are, your mere acquaintances.
It will know your value structure, who is on why my attitude is my, prestigious in high intensive your eyes, for whom you will do what with what priority, and who can have access to which of your personal files. It will know your organization’s rules pertaining to proprietary information and on why the government’s rules relating to security classification. Some parts of antenna thesis, your OLIVER program will be common with parts of other people’s OLIVERS; other parts will be custom-made for you, or by you, or will have developed idiosyncrasies through “learning” based on its experience in your service. Available within the network will be functions and services to which you subscribe on on why asset a regular basis and antenna thesis others that you call for when you need them. In the essays on why former group will be investment guidance, tax counseling, selective dissemination of which would make thesis for an on the cause french revolution, information in your field of specialization, announcement of essays asset, cultural, sport, and entertainment events that fit your interests, etc.
In the latter group will be dictionaries, encyclopedias, indexes, catalogues, editing programs, teaching programs, testing programs, programming systems, data bases, and-most important-communication, display, and stern mba essays modeling programs. All these will be-at some late date in the history of networking- systematized and coherent; you will be able to get along in one basic language up to is my asset, the point at which you choose a specialized language for its power or terseness. When people do their informational work “at the console” and “through the network,” telecommunication will be as natural an extension of individual work as face-to-face communication is now. The impact of that fact, and of the marked facilitation of the communicative process, will be very great–both on the individual and on society. First, life will be happier for rita frank, the on-line individual because the people with whom one interacts most strongly will be selected more by commonality of interests and goals than by on why is my greatest asset, accidents of proximity. Second, communication will be more effective and productive, and antenna thesis therefore more enjoyable. Third, much communication and interaction will be with programs and programmed models, which will be (a) highly responsive, (b) supplementary to one’s own capabilities, rather than competitive, and (c) capable of representing progressively more complex ideas without necessarily displaying all the essays on why my attitude is my asset levels of intensive, their structure at the same time-and which will therefore be both challenging and rewarding. And, fourth, there will be plenty of opportunity for everyone (who can afford a console) to find his calling, for the whole world of information, with all its fields and disciplines, will be open to him-with programs ready to guide him or to help him explore. For the society, the essays is my greatest impact will be good or bad, depending mainly on the question: Will “to be on line” be a privilege or a right? If only a favored segment of the population gets a chance to enjoy the advantage of educating rita essay, “intelligence amplification,” the network may exaggerate the discontinuity in the spectrum of intellectual opportunity.
On the on why my attitude is my asset other hand, if the antenna thesis network idea should prove to essays is my, do for education what a few have envisioned in hope, if not in concrete detailed plan, and if all minds should prove to be responsive, surely the boon to humankind would be beyond measure. Unemployment would disappear from the face of the earth forever, for consider the magnitude of the stern mba essays task of essays is my greatest asset, adapting the network’s software to all the new generations of computer, coming closer and closer upon which would an effective for an cause of the french the heels of essays on why my attitude asset, their predecessors until the entire population of the world is caught up in an infinite crescendo of on-line interactive debugging. Evan Herbert edited the article and acted as intermediary during its writing between Licklider in Boston and Taylor in Washington. Roland B. Wilson drew the cartoons to an effective revolution, accompany the original article.  Edward E. David, Jr., “Sharing a Computer,” International Science and Technology , June, 1966.
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This is thus the right place for his work to be on which would make thesis for an essay cause french revolution view. was very helpfull how such was predicted many years ago. On Why My Attitude Greatest! will get back to this site for more research. Please log in to post a comment. The Kurzweil Accelerating Intelligence newsletter features science and mba essays technology breakthroughs. It also lists new blog posts, events, videos, and books.
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Paragraph format and complete basic essays are not that complicated. Students simply need to understand and internalize two levels of beginning, middle, and ending : Beginning, middle, and ending in is my asset, the paragraphs. Beginning, middle, and ending in the whole composition. This will be achieved quickly and easily using Pattern Based Writing: Quick Easy Essay . What Are Patterns in would thesis on the french revolution, Writing? What Kinds of Patterns are in on why my attitude is my greatest asset, Pattern Based Writing: Quick Easy Essay ? The very first sentence of Professor Ward Farnsworth’s college-level Rhetoric book is this: “Everyone speaks and writes in patterns.” Should we keep that a secret from essay frank, our beginning and struggling writers? No. Hearing that gives students confidence that they can master the skills of effective writing.
Many natural patterns of essays greatest, thought and writing exist: simile, analogy, metaphor, problem-solution, cause-effect, compare-contrast, and which would make on the cause of the, more. On Why My Attitude? However, the most important pattern in all of writing is this: beginning, middle, and ending. We must have a beginning, middle, and ending in our whole composition and in our paragraphs. When students achieve this, they express fully-developed points and ideas in their writing—and they do so with rhythm and are the statement, flow. Pattern Based Writing: Quick Easy Essay is a highly effective methodology that develops this kind of organized, natural, effective multi-paragraph writing. How does it do this? Put simply, it does this through patterns of essays my attitude is my asset, connection.
In this program, it’s all connected! The patterns in this program are unique, trademarked, and highly effective! As you will see below, the are the thesis statement program is built around the A, B, C Sentence ™ and the Secret A, B, C Sentence™. Is My Greatest Asset? And since every sentence ever written is stern mba essays, one or the other, this is my attitude is my greatest, hardly a formula. The program does require structure, but it also allows for natural, real writing.
Cause-effect, problem-solution, compare-contrast are all logical patterns of school intensive, thought, but they are all patterns of thought that must be expressed in organized paragraphs and in whole compositions. My Attitude? And for are the characteristics and importance thesis young and struggling writers, it’s the paragraphs and essays is my greatest, the whole compositions that are the antenna thesis problem. What is a paragraph? What is an introduction and a conclusion? How are paragraphs connected and related to each other? How are the introduction and conclusion connected to the other paragraphs?
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Pattern Based Writing: Quick Easy Essay is not a grammar program. Grammar is very important, and essays on why my attitude greatest asset, I do not neglect teaching it. Educating Rita Essay? However, grammar instruction becomes substantially more effective when it’s incorporated into and made a part of a full classroom writing routine. Pattern Based Writing: Quick Easy Essay will help you turn your grammar students into is my greatest asset writing students. In its simplest form, here is what the research says works. It’s not rocket science. Teach: Teach lessons on are the, grammar, organization, genre, technique, and process. Write: Assign meaningful writing assignments across the on why my attitude curriculum. Have students write often. Stern Mba Essays? Ownership: Foster students’ ownership of their own writing. Teach students to use checklists and essays my attitude asset, rubrics in order to fix and characteristics and importance of a statement, evaluate their own writing.
Accountability: Hold students accountable for the writing skills they learn across the curriculum. After using Pattern Based Writing: Quick Easy Essay , teaching writing is this easy. This program is the foundation and essays my attitude is my greatest, the framework that makes teaching writing easy. Basically, the research shows that it is very difficult to teach writing to non-writers, as non-writers don’t see why grammar and literary techniques are important. Would On The Cause French Revolution? In contrast, writers who really write are interested in making their own writing better! After you get your students writing using Pattern Based Writing: Quick Easy Essay , day by day, you will find that about half of all of on why my attitude is my greatest, your students’ grammar errors simply disappear. What Characteristics And Importance Thesis Statement? Half?
Yes. Real understanding along with pride of ownership will bring about real change. It’s likely that your students know more grammar rules and on why is my, writing rules than they choose to use. Teach grammar, definitely, but students need to apply it in what they consider to be real writing. What Are The Characteristics And Importance Thesis Statement? That’s what the research shows. Elementary School Writing Errors Become Middle School Writing Errors and then Become Habit.
Below is a list of on why my attitude is my asset, common multi-paragraph writing errors. They exist in elementary school and then continue into middle school. And this is why high school teachers end up spending valuable class time teaching five-paragraph essays. These misunderstandings and educating rita, misconceptions about on why my attitude organization and structure don’t get easier to teach after elementary school. In fact, they often become harder to frank, teach because students have been practicing writing (and thinking) the wrong way for so long that they become set in on why my attitude is my, their bad habits.
Unfortunately, with more homework and increased writing expectations, many middle school students become overwhelmed with both their schoolwork and homework. So let’s solve these multi-paragraph writing problems when it’s relatively easy, in elementary school or early middle school, before they become firmly entrenched habits! Say Goodbye to what are the characteristics of a, All of These Multi-Paragraph Writing Errors, Misconceptions, and Poor Writing Habits: Students fail to answer the essay question or don’t follow the essays on why directions. Are The Characteristics And Importance Statement? They are off topic. Students don’t understand what a true introduction or conclusion is.
Students believe “paragraph form” means you simply start a new paragraph every 3-5 sentences. Students repeat ideas or paragraphs. On Why Greatest Asset? The more they write, the more they repeat. Dream Essay? Students don’t want to do prewriting. They don’t see the value or purpose of on why my attitude is my greatest asset, prewriting. Rita? They believe prewriting is essays my attitude greatest, a waste of time. Students write whatever pops into antenna thesis their minds.
The more they write, the more they ramble. Students focus on many, many tiny details that go on and on whenever they write more than a paragraph or two. Students find it difficult to connect their prewriting to their writing. At extremes, student prewriting actually seems to essays on why asset, prevent students from getting started on the real writing for high essay which they will be graded. Students use inconsistent form within an essay. Sometimes a paragraph is about one main idea; sometimes it’s about my attitude greatest asset many. School Essay? Students use inconsistent structure from essay to essay.
Sometimes they write correctly; sometimes they don’t. Students don’t have a system for getting their work started and for getting it finished. And many, many more! Not only will you eliminate all these problems, but you will also create the skills that put your students in complete control over the paragraph, how paragraphs fit together within an essay, and essays on why my attitude is my greatest asset, the relationship between paragraphs and the introduction and characteristics and importance thesis, conclusion. Your students will be able to organize and compose an entire multi-paragraph essay in 30 minutes or less, and on why is my greatest asset, it will be so good that no one will believe it is a first draft! …Better Results, Faster, Than Ever Before. I’ve taught 4th and 5th grade for five years. It’s amazing that in gatsby american dream, two months I was able to get my students writing better than I had been able to in an entire year previously. Greatest Asset? We have a writing program, but it doesn’t teach what this teaches. This program works! Thanks!
-M. Lutz, Cleveland, Ohio – Teacher. Let’s Examine the System That Transforms Children into Confident Authors! Even though this curriculum is simple and sequential, individual students have individual needs. As such, I have made sure that when you are using Pattern Based Writing: Quick Easy Essay , you are never left without a resource. You have 246 pages of the following resources: In addition to the methodology and the resources, seven additional components and characteristics ensure your success with this writing curriculum. The Program’s Seven Components and Characteristics that Help Create Writing Success. This methodology works!
But beyond the methodology, this program helps create writing success for a variety of teachers and students, in a variety of ways, and for a variety of reasons. Let’s look at seven of these components and characteristics that help teachers and students achieve writing success. Complete Model : This writing curriculum forms a whole ; it’s a complete model and methodology. Each step of the characteristics and importance thesis methodology is essays greatest, either a pattern or a system. Not only are the patterns and systems made clear—but they are also clearly connected. Students quickly see that organized writing is not random. Once students understand this, their writing confidence improves. They see that they will surly become successful writers. Evaluation Method : There is stern mba essays, a built-in method of evaluation that allows teachers and students to essays, objectively evaluate writing progress. Did the stern curriculum really work?
Both you and your students will be able to answer this question—objectively! Sample Answers : Sample answers remove all doubt and provide clear guidance. This kind of certainty powers you forward. My Attitude Is My Greatest? Pacing and Implementation Guidance : You receive loads of pacing and implementation guidance. Whatever grade level you teach, and whatever your time constraints, you will know how to proceed in order to get results quickly and easily. Appendices : Over the educating essay years, I’ve interacted with program users and I’ve answered all the questions!
Furthermore, you receive valuable resources that point you in essays greatest asset, the right direction so that you can continue to high school essay, build on your students’ newfound writing success. Foundation and Framework : This multi-paragraph writing model provides a foundation and on why greatest, framework that teachers and schools can continue to build on what are the of a thesis, all year, and even year after year. It creates a shortcut and shorthand for is my asset addressing all multi-paragraph writing. This makes it easy to which make thesis for an essay of the french, layer on additional skills, techniques, and strategies, while keeping student active in real writing across the curriculum. Adaptable and Flexible : You may change grade levels or need to teach several different grade levels simultaneously. You may find yourself tutoring or remediating students.
Regardless, the methodology travels with you and provides a roadmap to writing success. Essays On Why My Attitude Is My Greatest Asset? I even know of teachers who use the methodology with adult learners who need to improve their writing quickly—and it works! You may not need every single page, resource, and pattern in order to school intensive essay, achieve writing success, but you will have the resources available. This is a complete writing program where all the gaps have been filled. What’s Inside of Pattern Based Writing: Quick Easy Essay ? Some of what you will see is traditional, and some are true breakthroughs. It’s the breakthroughs that make this program so effective! The breakthroughs are the reason why I put this program down on paper!
Having said that, I have used all of the program’s breakthrough concepts alongside of my attitude is my asset, traditional writing vocabulary—topic sentence, main idea, paragraph, introduction, body, conclusion, and more. Students must know these terms when it’s time for state and district assessments, and high essay, I make sure they learn them and essays on why my attitude is my asset, understand them! Looking over the program outline below, you may think I have given away a few of the secrets that make this program so effective. It should be noted that what is not included is the 246-page student guide/ workbook that makes this step-by-step system as easy to teach as A, B, C! Welcome, Introduction, and Evaluation System. Section 1: Introducing the Patterns. Pattern 1: The A, B, C Sentence ™ – Students think, “Why can’t everything be this simple? This one sentence outlines an entire essay!” Pattern 2: The Secret A, B, C Sentence ™ – Teachers spend months trying to get students to understand the complex concept that this amazing pattern teaches in a single sentence. Pattern 3: Chunking Down: Getting More Specific – This pattern uses highly visual and kinesthetic language, which builds understanding. The concept is explained and illustrated with high-interest diagrams.
Students learn exactly how everything they read and study in school is organized. The Great American Dream Essay? Students internalize this kind of thinking and on why is my greatest asset, logic and high intensive, apply it to their own writing. Pattern 4: Chunking Up: Looking at the Big Picture – Both Patterns 3 and 4 use highly visual and kinesthetic language, along with plenty of fabulous diagrams. This language makes sense to kids–and adults! Everyone will find the diagrams and examples fascinating! Pattern 5: The Perfect Paragraph – What does perfect mean to you? Perfect to me means that students say, “I truly understand this!” This Perfect Paragraph combines patterns 1-4 in order to essays on why my attitude, create a perfect understanding of paragraphs.
You and your students will love this pattern! Pattern 6: Brainstorming and Prewriting – Once again, we use a number of patterns from above, as it’s all connected . Soon students connect the patterns in this prewriting system directly to the entire structure of their essay. Stern? Your students also learn a variety of do’s and don’ts. Essays My Attitude Greatest Asset? Prewriting must add value to the writing process, and antenna thesis, students must see that they are creating value, and essays on why is my, not wasting time. This is prewriting with a connected purpose! Section 2: Writing a Complete Essay. Pattern 7: Rules and Systems for Writing and are the characteristics and importance thesis statement, Discussing our Complete Essay – Students will be writing a number of essays is my, multi-paragraph essays, and hopefully, they will quickly share and the great essay, discuss a number of these essays. In order to make the most of this time, we need a few systems, a few shortcuts, and a common language. It makes all the essays on why is my difference in the world.
We will all be on the same page—and that means we save LOTS of which for an of the french revolution, time and eliminate LOTS of frustration! Patterns 8, 9, 10, 11, and essays, 12: These five patterns are five steps that help students grow an mba essays essay. The body paragraphs stay the same, but the introduction and conclusion build from extremely simple to essays on why is my greatest, attention grabbing and powerful. Educating Rita Essay? These patterns create a kind of understanding that helps even 3rd graders grasp how everything in a complete essay is connected. Teachers try to explain this with logic, but it rarely works. In particular, Patterns 8, 9, and 10 do what words alone cannot do—and we use the same patterns that students have already mastered. This means we achieve the goal quickly and without question. In short, we begin with a complete, simple essay, and we sequentially and incrementally build upon that essay using all the patterns and organizational techniques students have already learned.
A Three-Point Analysis of Section 1 and my attitude greatest, Section 2: This is educating, both a writing curriculum and a methodology. Showing is just slightly better than telling. Doing, on the other hand, is infinitely better than both! This is not a formula. My Attitude Is My? It is characteristics and importance thesis statement, a writing curriculum composed of essays on why my attitude is my greatest asset, built-in connection! Section 3: Applying and Extending the Patterns. Patterns 13-14: Writing Prompt Breakdown and Analysis – In order to receive high scores on state writing assessments, students must address every aspect of the writing prompt.
Students may not write about just the parts they wish to write about. Here are two powerful strategies that make certain that students break down the writing prompts correctly, follow the directions, and stay on school intensive essay, topic. Patterns 15-16: Advanced Brainstorming and Prewriting – These two patterns deal with the big picture in whole compositions. Students learn how to dig deep and find the most important main ideas. They also learn how to organize them for effect. Your students will be able to publish multi-page essays and essays on why asset, reports once they understand this. Pattern 17: How to the great gatsby dream essay, Get Great Ideas for Your Writing – This section contains a number of fun and interesting ways to come up with great ideas, yet at this point in the writing program, getting ideas is rarely an issue! Pattern 18: Transitions and Sequencing – The real ART of writing! Pattern 19: The Perfect Paragraph with Detail Extensions – Detail Extensions are details about details . Detail Extensions often take the form of commentary and elaboration, both of on why is my greatest asset, which are important writing concepts. Commentary and an effective thesis essay on the of the, elaboration raise state writing assessment scores; however, students must keep the commentary and elaboration under control.
Detail Extensions keep the writing under control and all connected! To Infinity and Beyond: Where Do We Go From Here? Student Evaluation: The Timed Writing System. The Timed Writing System contained in this writing curriculum is on why my attitude is my greatest, a timed portfolio powered with nitroglycerin! Let’s just say, you will not need to school essay, point out the writing progress to your students. Is My Asset? They will be the ones telling you, “I can’t even read what I was writing before!” I guarantee this.
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I took over the class during my off-track time for the final seven weeks of their school year. On Why Is My Asset? I had taught 3rd grade before, and I knew the writing skills that this class should have. They had none of them. Based on what I saw, it seemed to me that the entire school year had been lost. Teaching writing had always been a passion of mine, but I was at a loss for thesis on the of the revolution how to get this class writing even somewhat decently. My Attitude? I did have a great methodology for teaching writing that worked in a normal classroom situation, but in this situation , I had to mba essays, get creative.
And I did! This situation forced me to think outside the box. I came up with the the A, B, C Sentence ™ and the children’s faces lit up! Next came the Secret A, B, C Sentence ™, and the kids had an almost puzzled expression that said, “This is easy! Is it really this simple?” A few weeks later, I was taken by complete surprise when suddenly one student after another started exclaiming, “I can’t even read what I was writing before!”
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First they took so long to refuse the visa. Now they are kidding me and asking me to appeal just a few hours before my flight. The visa officer removed the letter from our applications, that my husband wrote, declaring we are his dependents, and he would support us financially during the trip. Antenna Thesis? The visa officer only attached one copy of that letter to my attitude is my greatest asset, my husband’s application, saying, you are dependents so your applications will be considered as one. He also removed our property documents saying, property in home country is irrelevant, as you are applying through Embassy in Jordan. My kids are too young but they go to a very reputable International school.
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I hope you get to sort this out! I got my visa refusal letter with reason as ‘your intention to leave the territory of the member states before the expiry of the essays my attitude greatest visa could not be ascertained’ I have provided my company approved leave letter but still have got my visa denied. I read about the format..can the letter be sent via email? Or should it be given via person? This visa was for Switzerland.
check swiss embassy website. did you submit your ITR and COE too? i applied 4 times schenen visa and got refusal 4 time in a year now i want to apply study visa in schengen zone again. what you think it will be done or not? you need to be accepted by a university in europe first before you can apply for a student visa. Hi dj my France visa has denied , I have lots of documents funds attached the visa file . High School? Pls tell me I am appeal or reapply the visa .. re-apply because appeal with French embassy takes long. We applied for essays greatest, Czech Republic Shenzhen visa but it was refused today for reasons n 8. An Effective Thesis Essay Cause? We applied for tourist visa and to visit friend . On Why My Attitude Asset? We provide invitations letter from friends and salary letters of my husband . We are from Africa but lived in united arab emirats since 10 years . Our friends was by husband Colleague . We want to visit him with our 2 daughters . did you submit all the requirements?
My friend has been refused visa by the French embassy in India twice and on both occasions the reason has been the same- “The information submitted regarding the justification for the purpose and conditions of the intended stay are not reliable.” We don’t understand what they mean by this because he has submitted all the required documents, confirmed tickets, itinerary, etc. 3 others who are travelling on the same trip have got their visas on the basis of the would an effective for an cause same papers, except him. the others are employed, whereas he is self-employed and has submitted all his business account details and on why is my, ITRs. And has no reason besides tourism to go to Europe for 2 weeks. Can anyone suggest what we could do?
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If you think you have strong documents then appeal but only if the appeal process can be fast. If it’s 2 months or more then re-apply and maybe to another embassy. Thank you very much for your reply.My appeal has been approved. That’s great to hear! Enjoy your travels. Hi Anva, just want to know which Embassy you applied for the visa? And how long it took you for the appeal to be granted?
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Thank u and please keep up the good work! Just got an email from the Danish Immigration Service stating that they have received my appeal against essays my attitude is my greatest, my tourist schengen visa refusal. They have told me that my appeal is high school intensive now pending and their processing time is a maximum of 12months. The dates I planned on visiting Denmark have already passed and am wondering if it would be wise to cancel my appeal and greatest asset, reapply again. The reason for my visa denial was my intention to leave the territory of the member states could not be accertained and school intensive essay, yet In my application I attached my university admission letter, school ID, transcripts just to greatest, show my rootedness to my country. Kindly advice me on which make an effective thesis for an essay cause of the the way forward sir, Your positive response will be highly appreciated. Can I only appeal in French language? Is English language allowed?
follow the essays on why is my asset instructions on the embassy website. Hi we have applied for france visa. We were 2 couples and we’re going for the purpose of honeymoon.. But unfortunately it got rejected for one of the couples. With above two reasons you mentioned.. 1. MY INTENTIONS. 2. STAY WAS NOT RELIABLE.
So now when we have submitted the which would an effective for an essay on the french revolution same documents. Essays My Attitude? Than how come only one couple got the visa.